(it was a long time that i’ve never
written a poem again.. because its too
hard to don emotions and be inspired and
have an eagerness to put it into writings, like
poems.. and i entitled it as
poems.. and i entitled it as
"Be That As It May" [Then]
Again, writing my piece of ache
It is, another lie and another fake
Can you help me, because I might rather break?
The reason: Love had over taken
A moron, a motley
As wanky as it’s a prey
You keep me in display
Your promise, you’ve betray…
The sky thunders
While I hear whispers
Deep inside me the rain downpours
And that made our amity over…
In my journey I meet a daisy
In the meadows it is lonely
A flower that signifies purity
So, I accompanied it in its misery
It seems to be weak and dull
And discern they are dual
Dark Elysium brought fatal
As dismay as it’s feral
I come athwart
With a wounded heart
Still I stand yearn like an Arch
Like a gladiator in the bulwark
In the brightest and harsh calamity
The daisy undergo in catastrophe
She was quit cold in the acrimony
But I’ll never transient nor treachery
Till we wait the sun dawn
With this toil we spawn
And oath an axiom
It is to live and Loom
i love this phrase: "piece of ache". sounds like piece of cake but opposite in meaning. damn you're good! :)
ReplyDeleteoh, just a comment on grammar. when you use the perfect tense (I have, love had...), use the past participle for the verb (I've never written, love had overtaken...). that is, if it's not intentional. sometimes poets screw grammar. :))
ReplyDeletewaah.. thank you very much i need criticism.. on my grammar.. ehe
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